Judge Not

From the imagination of Chase Shivers

Series Launched: April 15, 2018
Latest Chapter Added: May 2, 2019

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Series Summary:
Primary Story Codes: Mf Ff ff fg fb Mff MFf Hf hf inc father/daughter creampie

Judge Not is the sequel to the very popular Groundhog Nights. This time, fifteen-year old Tera is our narrator, picking up after the concluding moments of the original's final act: giving her father, Quinn, her virginity. Unknown to either, Quinn's time loop was a small piece of a bigger drama playing out across the Universe, and neither will be safe until they figure out what exactly is happening to them. And maybe not, even then.


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Comments on Judge Not:

Author Date Comment Chase's Response
Anonymous 9 November 2018 Hi just found your page.. I love it!!! Just read judge not.. wondering when the next chapter will be coming out? Unfortunately, around the time you wrote me, I began a divorce process. Hopefully sometime in the spring of 2019.
AussieRay 6 October 2018 I just finished chapter 14 of Judge Not, I am not normally into sifi erotic stories, but it followed on from Quinn's tale and was easy to absorb.

I wonder how you writers organise the plots and subplots, but please keep doing it, as you have converted me.

How are you going with the extension of Run, and, and ...

Thanks for a good read, I look forward to your further posts.
Thanks, AussieRay!

Re: Plots: For me, a lot of the time I just let a story flow and only later, after a chapter has been written, do I bother to make notes about plot points and look to see if I've introduced any holes. It's just better for me to spontaneously develop the more action-oriented stories that way. I rarely, if ever, know what "comes next" in stories like Judge Not, whatever it is just flows out as I type away. I find if I plan things out, I have a much harder time writing to the target. Instead, I sort of draw the target after I've gone some way towards reaching it. It involves constantly checking for plot holes or pieces of the story that haven't been wrapped up, but it flows easier for me that way. I know other authors who detail and plan, but that's not particularly for me.

Re: Run sequel: I haven't done much with it yet, just part of a chapter and some notes about possible plot ideas. I'll probably not get to it until I've wrapped up (or nearly so) Judge Not and moved The Protege further along.
Anonymous 1 October 2018 absolutly love it, great storyline, you have such a great imagination to construct two storylines together; good v evil with loving sex. More Please! (rating: 10) Thank you!
Anonymous 6 September 2018 Ugh, have completely lost interest in this story, I liked Groundhog, but this has just added too many over the top fantasy things and characters, didn't like the shift in pov either away from the dad.

There's nothing left of what I liked basically.

I especially don't want to read about guys sucking dick or getting fucked by other guys. (rating: 1)
*shrug* Okay. Thanks for letting me know, I guess.
Eragon.myne 4 August 2018 The rating reflects my overall entrapment with nearly all your works. Hardly a day goes by before reading your latest works. I'm rather a gluten for it. Except the scat, not really a fan of it. You are rather talented at creating other realities much as Tara has. I've read most of your works and hope to see progress in most of them. I appreciate the dedication you put towards your writing, it must take a huge amount of your personal time, unless you are just that brilliant. Wishing you excellent health. (rating: 10) Thank you, E.m! It does take a decent amount of time to write as much as I do, but it comes faster than I have a right to expect when it's flowing. I'm humbled so many people enjoy what I write!
Anonymous 27 July 2018 I love your writings...all of them. Hard to put down. Harder still waiting for new chapters. I feel like I'm right in the story, it's amazing! (rating: 10) Thanks so much, anon!
Ricky 2 July 2018 im enjoying judge not up until chapter 8 starts to make sense what happened in groundhogs day. Thanks, Ricky!
dawg 11 May 2018 Good stuff. Small typo: "That's because the are real, my Dear." Thank you, and fixed!
Anonymous 29 April 2018 love Si-Fi love erotica. This story combines the best of both.Awaiting more............. Thank you!
Anonymous 24 April 2018 Dramatic developments... (rating: 10) More to come!
Ron 19 April 2018 Holy shit Chase you have nailed it on this one, ultra sexy ultra romantic you just have the touch, I claim the title of your biggest fan this has to be one of the top of your stories I absolutely love it. so many different things going on I would not want to try to keep all the scenarios straight. great job again. (rating: 10) Thanks, Ron! I'm really glad you are enjoying the story! It's definitely rather complex but a lot of fun to write. My plan is for this series to be a "middle third" of a trilogy at this point.

Plus, I said in the intro that GN and JN share a universe with another series, and I'll be doing a sequel of that one in the middle of Judge Not and it's final installment (at some point) which will further tie the two together. Not sure when Judge Not will wrap up. I expect it to be longer than Groundhog, so it will probably take months to finish, and I'm not yet sure of the other series' plot. I may start writing it before finishing JN if I want to interweave the plots a bit, but I might wait. Not sure yet.
konrad 17 April 2018 Loved Groundhog Nights and couldn't wait for Judge Not. Thank you so much. My pleasure, konrad! I hope you like the new series!
RS Jenkins 17 April 2018 You really hit the jackpot on this one Chase wonderful story really runs you in a bunch of directions to lead you to the end of Chapter 5, excellent this sequel really out shines the original Groundhog nights. Thank you again, I look forward to the next chapters. Thanks so much, RS! I'm really enjoying finally getting to tell this story. It's been fun so far, and I hope you continue to enjoy it!
Anonymous 16 April 2018 Great start to the story. Only caveat: The girl's voice is a bit too adult for a teenager Thanks! Re: Tera's voice: *shrug* I do my best, but I'm not a fifteen-year old girl, nor do I hang out with teenagers, so... I do my best. I'd rather she sound like an adult than the spare few teenagers I hear from time to time. (rating: 8)
Eram 15 April 2018 Have not read any of the story yet, but having read most of the others , RUN seems to be the logical choice of shared universe. I look forward to the story unfolding. One vote for Run! Hope you enjoy the tale!
Plan-B 16 April 2018 It's been a while, dear writer, perhaps you remember, and hopefully, no one has imitated my moniker.

Very interesting plot line, and again, would make a wonderful read, even without the sex. (rating: 8)
Thanks, Plan-B. Nice to hear from you again!
Chas 17 February 2018 I love the twist in this continuation from the Groundhog series. Another great series from you. I look forward to your continued efforts with your other saga's. I will continue to read many of your other short stories and am considering reading Run while waiting for the others to be updated. I look forward to seeing if the voice in Tara's head is her name sake or not, evidently the same force that had Dad in the time loop. I really like your style in all the various thought streams to bring about the evolution of the characters too. Keep up the great work! Thanks so much, Chas!